We showed Helen the rough cuts for our Food Festival footage and the Banksy news package footage. Below are the comments made:
Food Festival:
- The reporter speaks too quickly. It's hard to keep up.
- There needs to be some breathing room between reports.
- The final clip "With lots going on over the next 3 days its sure to be a great year so come on down, tuck in and see what Britains got to offer.. I’m Cecily Snowball signing out, back to the studio." could be shortened to just the tag.
Banksy News Package:
- There are a lot of PTCs .
- The shots were good though.
Our plan of action is to contact Cecily and ask her if she can re-record her voice-over lines. With that done I can add them in to the Food festival edit.
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