As the film's plot has significantly changed this otherwise 2nd draft is technically a 1st draft due to the previous script being so different. Anyway below is the '1st draft' of the new Grit.
I'm very happy with this new script. Compared to the previous version this has it beat in every possible aspect. I feel my ending will require the most changing as I'm not entirely sure how much to give away in the conversation between Sean and Archie.
It flows a lot, lot better than it did last time: here I feel every scene and every word has a purpose. The last script seemed very random and scattered.
I am anticipating 2-4 more drafts but this is definitely a massive step in the right direction.
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