I'm rather liking this new potential idea I have; it's certainly more engaging and interesting than 10 minutes of three people insulting each other.
I think I'm going to go with this idea instead.
So what about the 3 story ingredients?
Goal - Father wants Accused to confess and to give him the location of his son.
Problem - Accused protests his innocence.
Change - Father's son is found but Father is arrested.
Pitch:
An accused kidnapper gets an unexpected visit from the victim's father at a public park.
(15 words)
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