Tuesday, 8 October 2013

Story-Telling Unit: Idea Development - Re-thinks

Without the police, gun and text: I now need to think of some new content for the film.

Ending ideas:

- Earlier in the film, the father's phone rings. He ignores it as he is focussing on questioning the accused man.
When the credits are rolling; we hear a phone ringing and going to voicemail: that father's.  His wife speaks in an excited tone. "They've found him! They've found him Luke! They found James! We're at the police station! Come quick!"

- Luke's anger, hate and desperation get the better of him: he kills Nick without realising it.

- Luke is persuaded by Nick that he isn't the one responsible. Luke lets him go. He's either lying or someone else confesses.

- Nick see's an opportunity and either attacks Luke or flees: both will prove that he is guilty.

A part of me wants Luke to come out as one of, or the bad guy.

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