Documentary Unit: Script Feedback

We received our feedback for our script:

Feedback Summary:

- Very good layout, it can be read just like a proper script.

- Avoid vox-pops

- Find a style for the film and think of your tone for the film.

- Think about the bigger picture: why are they doing this? 

- Ensure you fully explain the RCSM: what do they do?

- Let us get to know the characters: who are they? Background and day-to-day life (if possible) 

Very valid points.

I'm thinking that a small segment on the RCSM should be just after the first time we see/hear LoneDon Knight. Then it cuts to, possibly, their FaceBook group page with the narrator saying:

"The RCSM, or Rain City Superhero Movement, is a large group of ordinary people who have banded together in a collective prepared to do what they can to make London a safer place. At (number of members) strong...."